sabrownPenpusher
On the day he vows to quit, a burned out psychiatrist breaks confidentiality and reveals the intriguing, mysterious, and dramatic lives of his patients.
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Hi, sabrown,
Your logline portends an interesting story. However, reading your logline, the following questions were immediately raised:
Why does the psychiatrist break confidentiality? and reveal the intriguing, mysterious, and dramatic lives of his patients? To achieve what?
Why does he want to quit in the first place?
What is the relation between the psychiatrist quitting and his decision on revealing the intriguing, mysterious, and dramatic lives of his patients?
What is he hoping/planning/aiming to achieve?
To me, the answer to the above questions should be included in your logline. Clear Context.
I suggest you include some more info and re-write. We will see after that.
I hope this helps.
Agreed:
What is the lead character’s goal?
What is standing in the way?
Is this a potential TV show, each week being about another strange case?