one of the twin police duo is not in his right mind but he is very smart also no one knows what macabre plans this one has in mind implicates him in wanting to commit a murder in fact there are investigations but he camouflages himself in his own work which leads him to not be discovered in the future from there they will be involved in other matters including the stalking of his brother’s daughter, his twin..
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one of the twin police duo is not in his right mind but he is very smart also no one knows what macabre plans this one has in mind implicates him in wanting to commit a murder in fact there are investigations but he camouflages himself in his own work which leads him to not be discovered in the future from there they will be involved in other matters including the stalking of his brother’s daughter, his twin..
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This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don’t have a clue what it is about.
May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events.
Read the sections labeled “Formula” and “Examples”, then read some example loglines here on the site and learn from the reviews.
Good luck!