logline: “an insomniac girl falls in an unlikely friendship with the reluctant night watchman only to discover he is a vampire”
hey you know, you should get out, enjoy the sun…
…Oh wait, you can’t
(from Book “By the Light of the Moon”)
..so the goal i had in mind for them was to adjust their lives for the sake of one other, like:
For him to convince his bloodsucking family to back off. For her to convince her family to stop their demands to meet the boy.
I am confused who is the protagonist
I am confused of the film category (on the whole spectrum of rom-com, more romance or comedy)
Also, can somebody suggest a unique goal (this one sounds like twilight series)
Thanks
The big question is: what does she have to do once she finds out he’s a vampire? Does the movie end there? I hope not. And why will it matter and for what after that?
At least her insomnia should help in the relationship, I would think.
You haven’t given us any clear conflict, adding that to the logline will help improve it.
It’ s an interesting idea, but as Richiev notes,? it needs a clear conflict.? What dramatic problem is created by this situation?? What conflict, what struggle ensues as a result of the relationship?
And as Brandon8719 asked, what is the hook that differentiates this from the “Twilight” series with which it will be immediately compared?