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Posted: December 31, 20172017-12-31T21:47:56+10:00 2017-12-31T21:47:56+10:00In: SciFi

possible sci-fi thriller “the ghost of past and future”

After a trial at peeking into the future goes wrong, the scientist must ensure the safety of his alternate identities from time cops, managing the linearity of his continuum

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      dpg Singularity
      2018-01-01T00:23:31+10:00Added an answer on January 1, 2018 at 12:23 am

      >>>?managing the linearity of his continuum

      Huh?? What does that mean?

      Film is a visual medium.? Therefore, it’s imperative that a logline? should describe a plot that can be visualized in the mind’s eye of the reader.? Even if only as a sketch.

      I, for one, am unable to form even a sketchy visual for? “managing the linearity of his continuum”.

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      Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-01-02T16:49:29+10:00Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:49 pm

      I, like DPG, can’t get a clear grasp on the plot from the logline. After reading your explanation, it’s a bit easier to understand what you’re trying to do in terms of a premise – a time loop that threatens to undermine the integrity of space-time. However, loglines are used to describe plots and that’s still unclear.

      What specifically does the MC want to achieve by the end of the story and how will he go about achieving it? In other words, what are the time cops threatening to do to him?

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