Raymond ex-soldier discovers a huge conspiracy targeting the world’s biggest technological exposition on earth while trying to prove his innocence in a set-up targeting his employer. He has to fight against a big multinational with controversial ideas topped by an ex Marshal of the region’s army to save his life and that of his loved ones.

Hi! Seems like you have a good start to a logline! However, it seems to have a lot going on here. What do you think about simplifying it to “one character” with a clear “major event” that establishes a clear “actionable goal” for the character?

Example: “An ex-soldier is caught in a cat and mouse game between the mob and the police when he is framed for a crime he didn’t commit. He must prove his innocence before the mob kills his family.”