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Posted: July 27, 20122012-07-27T03:10:17+10:00 2012-07-27T03:10:17+10:00In: Public

Rosie, a successful businesswoman, finds herself floundering in the search for her one true love. When a handsome stranger comes into her life she must decide if she?s ready to settle down, or if there?s more to life than white picket fences.

Untitled romantic comedy

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    1. JVGray
      2012-07-28T22:35:09+10:00Added an answer on July 28, 2012 at 10:35 pm

      If Rosie’s desire is to find true love then there is something missing in the log line that presents a reason for her to question if finding that person is what she truly wants. Just as an example – if she has to give up a job she loves or she doesn’t want kids and he has one – then she has to learn to live with it or something that changes her expectations of what “true love” is or can be.

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    2. Carang Penpusher
      2012-08-23T18:10:30+10:00Added an answer on August 23, 2012 at 6:10 pm

      It already explains the plot. No ‘hook’ to make me interested.

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    3. Richard Cosgrove
      2013-07-31T09:31:50+10:00Added an answer on July 31, 2013 at 9:31 am

      The story is clear, as is the protagonist, but both are generic.

      There is nothing in this logline to differentiate this story from every other romance/coming-of-age film about a businesswoman.

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