Untitled romantic comedy
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Rosie, a successful businesswoman, finds herself floundering in the search for her one true love. When a handsome stranger comes into her life she must decide if she?s ready to settle down, or if there?s more to life than white picket fences.
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If Rosie’s desire is to find true love then there is something missing in the log line that presents a reason for her to question if finding that person is what she truly wants. Just as an example – if she has to give up a job she loves or she doesn’t want kids and he has one – then she has to learn to live with it or something that changes her expectations of what “true love” is or can be.
It already explains the plot. No ‘hook’ to make me interested.
The story is clear, as is the protagonist, but both are generic.
There is nothing in this logline to differentiate this story from every other romance/coming-of-age film about a businesswoman.