Anonymous Painting
Tragic BronsonPenpusher
Sinister things start to happen in Dave’s house after he hangs up a painting he received from an anonymous sender.
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>>> Sinister things start to happen….
Like what? In what way is it life threatening?
And what does he do about it? ?What becomes his objective goal as a result? ?Why can’t he just get rid of the painting — end of problem?
This is a situation, the story would be what does he do about it.
I also agree with dpg, instead of just saying ‘sinister things start to happen’ you should give us a specific example. Do voices tell the lead to kill? Do the walls begin to bleed? Does Donald Trumps hair jump out of the TV and attack the lead character? One specific is better than a hundred vague’s.