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Posted: April 28, 20192019-04-28T22:05:25+10:00 2019-04-28T22:05:25+10:00In: SciFi

Six people with minds unlike our own. Famous movie monsters, invisible twins, conspiracies, clones, a lizard-queen, and obliterating an entire race. What happens when the line between reality and fantasy becomes blurred?

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2019-04-28T22:19:03+10:00Added an answer on April 28, 2019 at 10:19 pm

      The logline presents a cast of unusual characters, but it has none of the essential elements for an industry-acceptable logline. Consult “Our formula” for guidelines on writing an industry-acceptable logline.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2019-04-29T18:04:38+10:00Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 6:04 pm

      Who is the lead character?

      What do they want?

      What is standing in their way?

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      2019-04-30T04:49:13+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2019 at 4:49 am

      You need an antagonistic force in a logline. This would be great for the back of a DVD or the description of a Netflix title, but it’s not a logline. Ensemble scripts are difficult to write loglines for because generally you want to focus on one plot line, not multiple, so boiling down your story to one essential arc will be key in re-writing a good logline.

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    4. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2019-04-30T08:17:51+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2019 at 8:17 am

      Agreed with all the above. Try also reading other loglines on this site to learn more.

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