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DMartiniPenpusher
Posted: September 4, 20212021-09-04T06:54:19+10:00 2021-09-04T06:54:19+10:00In: Coming of Age

The lives of four unique midwestern friends, set in multiple timelines, are forever altered when fame chooses one of them but thrusts all of their lives into chaos.

The lives of four unique midwestern friends, set in multiple timelines, are forever altered when fame chooses one of them but thrusts all of their lives into chaos.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-09-04T16:47:46+10:00Added an answer on September 4, 2021 at 4:47 pm

      Is the story about those who did not become famous?
      Or is the story about the one who became famous?

      From whose point of view do we see this story?

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      • DMartini Penpusher
        2021-09-04T23:57:03+10:00Replied to answer on September 4, 2021 at 11:57 pm

        Hi

        Thank you for your feedback/help. The story leads with the famous one but told from separate timelines. (Think- Wonder Years and This is Us). Ive thought about a narrator but Im not sure. Any feedback is appreciated

        Thank you

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        • Richiev Singularity
          2021-09-06T09:15:10+10:00Replied to answer on September 6, 2021 at 9:15 am

          Sounds interesting I like the concept

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2021-09-07T07:06:34+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 7:06 am

      What are these four friends aspiring to become?

      Example:
      “The lives of four Midwestern aspiring rockstars are forever altered when stardom chooses only one throwing their longtime friendship into chaos”

      Keep going.

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