The world’s fate rest on one man with zero combat skills, to save it he has to survive the police, the army and assassins from another dimension who kills without remorse.
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The world’s fate rest on one man with zero combat skills, to save it he has to survive the police, the army and assassins from another dimension who kills without remorse.
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I am not seeing the connection why this one man is the only one who can save the world? Why him?
This question would probably be answered if you were to add the inciting incident into the logline.
As Richiev said.? What is the inciting incident that forces him — the one least qualified to fight back — to be the one who has?to defeat the bad guys?
Hi Itai, or ma nishma?
Agreed with Richiev and DPG, but also to what end?
What is the goal he must achieve before knowing, beyond a doubt, that the world is safe again?
For example Austin Powers had to stop Dr Evil from erupting all volcanoes around the world, Captain Mandrake had to get the secret communications code from general Ripper to prevent an all out nuclear war. The equivalent in this concept needs to me written into the logline, otherwise it’s a generic save the world concept.
Perhaps he must close the worm-hole to the other dimension or something to that effect.