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Sam Garner
Posted: June 27, 20142014-06-27T08:53:07+10:00 2014-06-27T08:53:07+10:00In: Public

The worlds two worst explorers accidentally find the lost city of El Dorado, only to find that it is in fact hidden deep within North Yorkshire.

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    1. beezeebee Penpusher
      2021-09-03T18:13:49+10:00Added an answer on September 3, 2021 at 6:13 pm

      Hi Sam. Love the irony of the incompetent ones finding El Dorado. However, I don’t understand where the main conflict is going to come from, which is probably because I can’t see a specific goal in this logline. This read more like an interesting inciting situation, but it’s unclear what the heroes want, what is standing in their way, and why defeat would be devastating for them.

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