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Things get hot in a Dead Zone for a ?Bad Bug Collector? after an accidental viral release on a tropical island.

Things get hot in a Dead Zone for a ?Bad Bug Collector? after an accidental viral release on a tropical island.
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    1. Singularity

      There is a lot I don’t understand; However I think I have deciphered your logline

      1: By bug collector, you must mean he is in the island collecting Butterflys. He has a net and he runs around the island trying to catch them but he is bad at it, he is a bad bug collector, then there is a viral release.

      2: Also not sure what you mean by a ‘Dead Zone’ is this connected to the Stephen King book, “The Dead Zone”

      3: Finally I am assuming a pop star accidentally releases a video of her new song and it “Goes Viral” There is an accidental viral release on the Island.
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      When a pop star’s new song goes viral on a remote tropical island, an inept butterfly collector must….

      (I guess the next question, what is it the inept butterfly collector must do about the accidental viral release of the video, enter the ‘dead zone’ and kill the singer while she is still a child?)

      🙂

       

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    2. Singularity

      As suggested by Richiev, the logline lacks clarity.

      And an objective goal for the protagonist. ?What is he supposed to do after “things get hot” ?(whatever that means) ? ?What’s his objective goal?

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    3. Singularity

      I agree with dpg, ?Also you should give us an bad guy. Here would be an example. ?”When the umbrella corporation accidental releases a deadly virus on a remote tropical island…”

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