Through the twists and turns of self-discovery, a young single mother is reunited with her soulmate.
HeatherCatesPenpusher
Through the twists and turns of self-discovery, a young single mother is reunited with her soulmate.
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Yep that?s a thing. But not a movie – sorry.
Does her self discovery happen in church, a relationship, a job or due to illness.
Is she struggling, is she rich?
What you have is what happens, but how and who are they.
Details are your friend.
What twist? What turns? these are the detail that will sell your script.
The best place place to start would be, what even sets the entire story in motion?
As the others said. The logline needs to be fleshed out with particulars.? What makes this story unique different from all the other scripts piling up on script readers’ desks about single mom’s looking for love?? Single mom’s looking for love is not a unique hook. A protagonist going on a journey of “self-discovery” is? not exactly unique either — and? it also pertains to subjective issues.
And she’s a single mom — doesn’t she have something more important to do, like provide financial support and emotional sustenance for a child (or children)?? Where does her offspring fit into the mix?
Whatever,? loglines are about specifically defined objective issues, not about vaguely defined subjective ones.?
So how does going on a journey of self-discovery translate into a specific objective goal and a specific obstacle that stands in the way?
Okay, so loglines are supposed to be more specific.? Does anyone have any resources that help a person learn how to be specific in 30-50 words?? From what I’ve researched loglines aren’t too specific.? The synopsis is what gets more into the detail.? Am I wrong?
I think you need to provide some context to grab the readers attention. What is the story?? Hope this helps a bit.
Cheers.
HeatherCates:
Actually, I think it more accurate to say that loglines needs to be specific — in as few words as possible.? No easy assignment, to be sure.
Specifically an ideal logline includes: 1] A protagonist with a? 2]? defining character strength or debilitating character flaw, who 3] pursues a specific objective goal? 4] in the face of overwhelming external obstacles, danger and suffering.
In the case of your logline,? the problem with “self-discovery” is? two-fold. First of all, it’s a vague term — “self-discovery” can mean, well, anything.? And if a word or phrase can mean anything then in a logline it means nothing.
Second, “self-discovery” is not an objective goal.? Rather it, refers to a subjective need.? “Self-discovery” refers to an invisible process that happens inside her head.? But film is a visual medium, which means that the process of “self-discovery” must be? made visible; to wit, it must be externalized.? And the way to do that is to visualize the internal process in terms of an external struggle for a specific external object or specific end goal.
If her internal need is to self-actualize, then what is the external means she goes about to satisfy that need?? What is the specific objective goal she sets for herself to resolve her internal need?
As an example, take the movie “Wild” (2014). It was based on the true story of a woman with a desperate subjective need to heal herself from her psychological — internal, invisible — wounds, many of them self-inflicted.? So, on the subjective (invisible) level, it’s the story of a woman’s process of self-healing.
And what is the external means by which she chose to heal herself?? She decided to do a solo hike of the Pacific Crest Trail. That became her objective goal.? ?It’s a goal fraught with? towering obstacles, real danger and frequent suffering.
It’s also a goal that can be visualized in a film.? The movie ends with a shot of her crossing the River of the Gods in Washington State. Objective goal reached!? And we know that in order for her to succeed externally, she had to heal herself internally. That’s the way it works in drama:? an external objective goal can only be achieved after resolving the internal emotional issue.
But, to repeat, the logline would be? focused on, framed in terms of her objective goal — not the subjective need: Thus:
The true story of a woman’s 1,100-mile solo hike of the Pacific Crest trail to recover from personal tragedy and drug addiction.? (22 words)
fwiw