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uzumaki12Penpusher
Posted: March 2, 20202020-03-02T23:08:43+10:00 2020-03-02T23:08:43+10:00In: Historical

Title: Curse Genre: Anthology Drama Series Logline: “In early 1800s America, an African slave is granted immortality and fights against the injustice facing the black community through the centuries as a vigilante. Pilot Logline: After a slave is revived from the dead, he struggles to free the other slaves and kill his manipulative plantation owner.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-03-03T08:19:37+10:00Added an answer on March 3, 2020 at 8:19 am

      As variable suggested.

      He’s immortal.? He’s a SJW with decades to fight slavery, to learn from his mistakes and failures,? to try, try , and try again.? And he can’t instigate one successful slave rebellion before the Civil War?? Not one?

      Not credible even as make-believe, wishful-thinking-history. Not believable given how history actually played out.

      If you want an audience to suspend disbelief and buy into the the premise, then the super-awesome protagonist, needs to fight a super-awesome antagonist, someone with equal power but opposite motives. A? SJW needs? a nemesis, should face seemingly insurmountable and believable obstacles.

      fwiw

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    2. variable Uberwriter
      2020-03-03T04:15:27+10:00Added an answer on March 3, 2020 at 4:15 am

      After achieving immortality – in context of fighting the injustice – what remains the conflict? What can possibly prevent him from freeing the other slaves?

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    3. Tony Byrd Penpusher
      2020-03-03T00:55:22+10:00Added an answer on March 3, 2020 at 12:55 am

      Love the idea. looking forward into wanting to see it so bad.

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