Title: Cutting Corners
Genre: Comedy
Format: Feature
CarlKPenpusher
A rookie hitman and a contract killer are next on the hit-list after taking shortcuts and killing the wrong guy twice on a mission ordered by a mafia kingpin. To avoid certain death, they make a body bubble from a victim’s corpse, frame their boss, and get away with the payment – A real killer story
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Wouldn’t the mafia boss find out early on the real mark is still alive – making trouble? It would be funny while the bungling hitmen are doing their thang the real mark shows up. I’m sure you have an answer for this, it’s just not clear to me how you overcome the gap.
Take care.
Hi
Thanks for your feedback. It all happens very quickly, all in about 2-3 hours, so it’s not really a problem.
Plus the target is out of country 🙂
Leaning towards:
“Two last chance hitmen must cover up a bungled hit in order to avoid certain death from their mafia kingpin employer”
Hope you find this constructive – make this yours.