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phatiusmcdoogalPenpusher
Posted: July 18, 20222022-07-18T03:09:07+10:00 2022-07-18T03:09:07+10:00In: Comedy

To make his life-long dream of becoming a detective a reality, an impulsive and excitable cop must escort a convict on his “Dead Man’s Day”, a day of chaperoned freedom for death row inmates before their execution. His calculated ward, though, will stop at nothing to avenge the man he was framed for killing.

Title: Dead Man’s Day

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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-07-18T16:44:40+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2022 at 4:44 pm

      Hi phatiusmcdoogal,
      Below is my understanding of your proposed logline:
      However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict).
      Is this close to what you are trying to say?

      To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why does the convict need escorting?) a death row inmate while his (calculated ward? What is that?) prosecutors are determined to avenge a man they claim he killed.

      I hope this helps

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      • phatiusmcdoogal Penpusher
        2022-07-18T22:20:00+10:00Replied to answer on July 18, 2022 at 10:20 pm

        Thanks so much for the feedback! This is a really helpful way to get it – getting your understanding of it. Lets me know it’s not clear enough. Thanks again!

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