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Daniel GalindoPenpusher
Posted: September 14, 20202020-09-14T00:32:21+10:00 2020-09-14T00:32:21+10:00In: Drama

Un fotógrafo, adicto a las carreras de galgos, se arruina. Su familia lo abandona, y él decide convertirse en mendigo en compañía de un galgo, aunque en realidad es una vieja bicicleta. Tendrá que expiar, sus errores del pasado.

Un fotógrafo, adicto a las carreras de galgos, se arruina. Su familia lo abandona, y él decide convertirse en mendigo en compañía de un galgo, aunque en realidad es una vieja bicicleta. Tendrá que expiar, sus errores del pasado.
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    1. oscuro escriba Penpusher
      2020-09-26T07:07:30+10:00Added an answer on September 26, 2020 at 7:07 am

      Al leer el logline original, no entendí bien la historia (claro , el traductor hizo de las suyas) sin embargo, creo que el logline debe ser lo más funcional posible, y a veces hay que quitarle esos detalles que tanto nos gustan , para que la esencia salga a la luz. Me parece una buena historia, la del viejo apostador y su bicicleta. faltaría el nudo o conflicto, y una posible resolución. saludos desde la patagonia.

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    2. Andres_ Penpusher
      2020-09-23T04:03:18+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2020 at 4:03 am

      Yo encuentro confusa (muy confusa) esta historia. Un vieja bicicleta? porque es fotógrafo? decide convertirse en mendigo? Se acaba siendo mendigo por las circunstancias imposibles de superar no decide hacerse un día. Yo depuraría el logline de elementos confusos y lo centraría en como cambia el personaje principal en la historia y como el galgo que le acompaña le ayuda a cambiar.

      “Un estricto padre de familia, adicto a las carreras de galgos, se arruina. Su familia lo abandona, y él comienza a convivir en compañía de un galgo. Para volver a ganar dinero decide entrenar a su nuevo compañero para las carreras y este le enseñara como el amor es el mejor maestro.”

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      • Daniel Galindo Penpusher
        2020-09-25T02:58:52+10:00Replied to answer on September 25, 2020 at 2:58 am

        Thank you very much for your help, it is true that the story is confusing since it is difficult for me to concentrate the whole story in a logline. the story is inspired by a real character, a homeless man who always walked through a city with an old bicycle. Investigating his life discover that in the past he was a photographer by profession and addicted to gambling greyhound racing which led to his ruin and abandonment by his family. This led to serious mental problems and his last days were spent in a psychiatric hospital. He did not want to receive help from anyone since living in poverty was his way of paying for his mistakes, a revenge against himself. I imagined this character seeing himself in the reflections of the shop windows with a greyhound, although it was actually an old bicycle that he found in the trash. his sin bells everywhere. This is a bit of history. The truth is that it is very difficult to be able to concentrate everything in a few lines. Thanks for your time.

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    3. Odie Samurai
      2020-09-15T12:53:44+10:00Added an answer on September 15, 2020 at 12:53 pm

      Google Translator from Spanish to English:
      A photographer, addicted to greyhound racing, goes broke. His family abandons him, and he decides to become a beggar in the company of a greyhound, although in reality he is an old bicycle. He will have to atone for his past mistakes.

      I’m a Texan, but only know Spanglish 😉 I hope Google interpreted this correctly.
      Daniel ¿sabes Inglés?

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      • Daniel Galindo Penpusher
        2020-09-16T01:45:27+10:00Replied to answer on September 16, 2020 at 1:45 am

        Unfortunately I do not speak English, the translation that Google did was correct.

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        • Odie Samurai
          2020-09-17T00:49:45+10:00Replied to answer on September 17, 2020 at 12:49 am

          Hay un lado positivo aquí, lo que lo destruyó “la adicción al juego que involucra a los galgos” y lo bueno en esto, el “galgo” que lo salva. Es como dos historias poderosas en una, ya que ambas necesitan recuperación.

          Me tomé algunas libertades con tu guión, hazlo tuyo.

          “Al perderlo todo en las carreras de galgos, un fotógrafo sin hogar y el galgo que perdió forman una amistad poco probable en el camino hacia la recuperación de sus consecuencias para recuperar a su familia”

          Cuídate.

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          • Daniel Galindo Penpusher
            2020-09-25T02:41:22+10:00Replied to answer on September 25, 2020 at 2:41 am

            thank you very much for your help

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