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pickerman123Penpusher
Posted: July 22, 20222022-07-22T11:03:06+10:00 2022-07-22T11:03:06+10:00In: SciFi

VOYAGE: After exhausting every medical and experimental procedure known to man to save his child’s life, a billionaire commits his entire fortune to perfect time travel to retrieve the one thing he believes will cure his son’s terminal illness — the blood of Christ.

Billionaire Franklin J. Dennis is the wealthiest man on earth. Yet despite his infinite wealth, tragedy strikes close to his heart when he learns his only child is months away from succumbing to a disease for which there is no cure. Having exhausted all methods of medical science known to man, Dennis, desperate turns his attention towards a Hundi theoretical scientist who may hold the key to time travel and allow Dennis to retrieve what he believes will cure his son — the blood of Jesus Christ. Can the marriage of science and faith save his son?

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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-07-22T15:34:44+10:00Added an answer on July 22, 2022 at 3:34 pm

      Hi, pickerman123,
      Personally, I think this billionaire will have many better choices in regards to his child if he can achieve time travel rather than obtaining christ’s blood. Don’t you think? However, if you really want to stick to your concept, I suggest the below template:

      A business (property, oil, banking, etc.) tycoon dedicates/sacrifices his entire fortune to perfect time travel so he can save his child’s life.

      I hope this helps

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      • pickerman123 Penpusher
        2022-08-01T09:51:33+10:00Replied to answer on August 1, 2022 at 9:51 am

        Ben:

        In the story the billionaire has exhausted every conceivable medical and experimental procedure to save his child’s life. It’s only then he pursues the possibility of time travel as a final attempt to cure his child’s terminal illness.

        Rich

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        • BenGilani Logliner
          2022-08-01T15:44:07+10:00Replied to answer on August 1, 2022 at 3:44 pm

          Hi Rich,
          Ok. I understand. This is how I see it more or less:

          After exhausting all possibilities to save his son’s life, an affluent desperate man dedicates his entire fortune to achieving time travel to retrieve the one cure that can save his son’s life — the blood of Christ.

          I hope this helps

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          • pickerman123 Penpusher
            2022-08-10T13:05:11+10:00Replied to answer on August 10, 2022 at 1:05 pm

            Ben:

            I thought hard and I think I’m going to develop the screenplay with us log line:

            VOYAGE
            The physicist best friend of an Illinois construction worker offers to help save his terminally son by taking him back through time to retrieve what be believes will heal the child — the blood of Christ.

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            • BenGilani Logliner
              2022-08-10T14:29:55+10:00Replied to answer on August 10, 2022 at 2:29 pm

              Hi Rich,
              I wish you good luck and success.

              Ben

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