What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?
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What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?
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This is more of a tagline than a logline.
A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.
I love this concept. I’d see this movie.
The longline tells me everything I want to know, and I’d buy into the script,
The only thing I’d straighten out and sharpen in this concept is the spelling of ‘straight’.
Great idea.