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Posted: September 25, 20152015-09-25T15:59:47+10:00 2015-09-25T15:59:47+10:00In: Thriller

What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?

What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?
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    1. priggy Logliner
      2015-09-29T00:27:54+10:00Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 12:27 am

      This is more of a tagline than a logline.

      A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.

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    2. Gill Logliner
      2015-09-26T20:56:06+10:00Added an answer on September 26, 2015 at 8:56 pm

      I love this concept. I’d see this movie.
      The longline tells me everything I want to know, and I’d buy into the script,
      The only thing I’d straighten out and sharpen in this concept is the spelling of ‘straight’.
      Great idea.

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