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Posted: 2017-10-26T00:43:09+10:00 In:

?An unlikely duo of a wacky magician and a former Shaolin nun must stop the released demon to save the kingdom and their lives from the demon?s revenge.?

?An unlikely duo of a wacky magician and a former Shaolin nun must stop the released demon to save the kingdom and their lives from the demon?s revenge.?
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    1. Best Answer
      Uberwriter

      Now it sounds like a comedy/action.

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    2. Best Answer
      Logliner

      How does this sound??“When a trapped demon escapes, an unlikely duo of a faithless nun and a reluctant magician are tasked by the queen to recapture it and save the kingdom.”

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    3. Best Answer
      Uberwriter

      This can’t be about the demon, it must be about the mortals that we will identify with as the viewer.

      A magician and former nun are at odds when it comes to saving their people from a rampant demon before it enslaves their entire kingdom forever.

      Conflict is king, even if they wind up working together, I assume they have very different means to accomplish the same goal.

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    4. Best Answer
      Uberwriter

      “When a captured demon finally finds a way to get rid of,”? — What does this mean up until the comma? Is this about the fight between 2 demons, one captured in a kingdom and another looking to attack?

      Therefore, what does the magician and ex-nun exactly have to do to turn the tide of the fight?

      I’m confused.

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