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Karel SegersLogliner
Posted: September 28, 20152015-09-28T12:06:32+10:00 2015-09-28T12:06:32+10:00In: Drama

A corporate burnout turned janitor receives a call from his ex-wife wanting to rekindle their marriage. Desperate to make it work, he must tell the truth and divulge his new career as a janitor.

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    1. steveylang Samurai
      2015-09-28T14:55:39+10:00Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 2:55 pm

      This is a great premise- however that is all that it is, as you have not really described the main plot line.

      I can see it going many different ways, some dramatic and some comedic. I think this is actually a good rom-com setup, even though you’ve indicated it’s a short.

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    2. Karel Segers Samurai
      2015-09-28T13:28:41+10:00Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 1:28 pm

      Love the concept!

      Wouldn’t the conflict be that he tries to hide his new career?

      And what is at stake for him? Does he also want to rekindle the marriage?

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