When a deadly contagion is unleashed, a DC insider tries to maintain his humanity while dealing with worldwide chaos and wrestling with the dilemma: How far will you go to survive when everything you love is gone?
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When a deadly contagion is unleashed, a DC insider tries to maintain his humanity while dealing with worldwide chaos and wrestling with the dilemma: How far will you go to survive when everything you love is gone?
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I can see where you are going with this but it needs to be more specific.
I am assuming your DC insider is one of those slick lobbyist whose allegiance is to whoever pays them? Herein lies his flaw.
State the dilemma clearly in your logline: he has to choose between maybe a wife who has left him, but still loves him, or his client, a drug company that has a vaccine he can use but only if he will do this one dispicable thing.? You must give him an actionable goal. Maintaining his humanity is not a goal. Your second sentence: How far will you go etc. should be implied in the logline not stated in the logline.
Hope this gives you something to ponder.