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Posted: October 8, 20122012-10-08T15:33:43+10:00 2012-10-08T15:33:43+10:00In: Public

When a Demon kidnaps his fiance, a timid janitor must uncover his past and locate a mythical artifact that encases the power of a god.

Horn of the Leviathan

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    1. Kriss Tolliday
      2012-10-08T20:29:52+10:00Added an answer on October 8, 2012 at 8:29 pm

      It certainly gives us more in terms of drawing us into the story. Does he have to locate the artifact because the demon can’t? Is it the demon that wants this artifact? I’m a little confused as to what the artifact will have to do with everything so think you need to add that in, like if the demon fails to get the artifact will he kill the fiancee?

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      2012-10-08T20:57:33+10:00Added an answer on October 8, 2012 at 8:57 pm

      If the janitor fails to get the artifact the demon will kill his fiance. Will re-word, thanks.

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