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Posted: April 15, 20122012-04-15T02:38:55+10:00 2012-04-15T02:38:55+10:00In: Public

When a famous Italian detective investigates the death of the daughter he didn\'t know he had, he uncovers more than just murder in this small, immigrant, upstate New York town.

Suspense, murder mystery.

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    1. uDawnWrite
      2012-04-15T06:57:43+10:00Added an answer on April 15, 2012 at 6:57 am

      This logline says a lot without giving away too much. I didn’t even pay attention to the genre you listed, and it describes Murder mystery exactly. Something I most definitely would like to see in the near future. The only word I would remove is immigrant, unless the strange happenings have something to do with their culture.

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    2. SQM
      2012-04-15T09:38:07+10:00Added an answer on April 15, 2012 at 9:38 am

      Thank you. Yes, the culture is important.

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    3. joey
      2012-04-15T10:55:35+10:00Added an answer on April 15, 2012 at 10:55 am

      I like this. My gut originally was telling me it’s too wordy after first read, but the core of the story is strong without little detail – just the way it should be.
      -Joey

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    4. PF
      2012-04-16T22:39:01+10:00Added an answer on April 16, 2012 at 10:39 pm

      This is very straight forward and easy to visualise as a film. I would also take out immigrant or be more specific. What culture are they from? This way we can see them. Good luck with it. PF

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