Penpusher
Posted: 2017-04-23T12:46:55+10:00 In:

When a feisty child psychologist fights the system to save a haunted boy, she crosses red lines but what she learns is as precious as what she gives.

When a feisty child psychologist fights the system to save a haunted boy, she crosses red lines but what she learns is as precious as what she gives.
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    1. Singularity

      If the story is about the lead character fighting the system, then the incident that sets the story in motion should be something cruel which the system does to the boy.
      that should be added to the logline.

      Also, ‘system’ is impersonal, You should give the “system” a face. A specific person who represents all that is wrong with the system.

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