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Winona Morris
Posted: March 22, 20132013-03-22T15:16:18+10:00 2013-03-22T15:16:18+10:00In: Student Loglines

When a girl wakes up with a beard on her first day at a new school she has to think of ways of hiding it from everyone but things get more complicated when she develops a crush.

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    1. Karel Segers Logliner
      2013-03-22T16:58:05+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 4:58 pm

      She might also consider shaving it off…

      Or else, reveal in the logline why she would not do this. You can work this in the ‘character flaw’: “When a girl with a phobia of sharp tools wakes up with a beard…”

      It is worth mentioning this is a short film, so the reader doesn’t expect a full feature to be milked from this (otherwise promising) concept.

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    2. 2013-03-22T20:25:48+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 8:25 pm

      I was going to say, yeah, I can’t see how this is more than a one- or two-gag film.

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