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When a grieving Matt returns back from his travels, he must find a way to shut up the blackmailer that is threatening to reveal his shocking secret to the love of his life; his dead brothers widow.

When a grieving Matt returns back from his travels, he must find a way to shut up the blackmailer that is threatening to reveal his shocking secret to the love of his life; his dead brothers widow.
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    1. Uberwriter

      When audience is quite open to his marrying the widow (since I am) you risk writing an antagonist instead with his current goal (to find a way to silence the blackmailer….why not go to the cops?)

      It would be a shocking secret if he had a hand in his brother’s death (then again, not what a protagonist would do)

      Drop the name for word economy.

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