Penpusher
Posted: 2016-08-11T12:52:58+10:00 In:

When a high school kid suspects his father is responsible for a series of grisly prostitute murders, he teams up with a plucky young call girl to positively identify and stop the murderer.

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    1. Logliner

      A high school age boy comes to suspects his father is responsible for a recent series of grisly prostitute killings. Together with a plucky young call girl, he?teams up working to find the truth and stop further killings.

      Seems better, what do you think?

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    2. I can see this as a Goonies-type story where the kids are sick of the adults telling them what to do and the police are useless. If you are going for this idea, i’d take out the prostitute murders and just say he is a “murderer”. Also, maybe a better inciting incident would be;

      An?adventurous?boy sets out to clear his father’s name when he is suspected of?committing?a series of recent murders.

      This gives him a clear and personal goal. Hope it helps.

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    3. Singularity

      Yes, why not just go to the police? ?Why does he take all the police work (investigation and apprehension) upon himself?

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    4. Uberwriter

      I am left with the question “why not just tell the police?”. You may struggle with people thinking this.

      A teenage boy teams with a young prostitute to prove his dad is a serial killer.

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