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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: January 19, 20222022-01-19T06:39:12+10:00 2022-01-19T06:39:12+10:00In: Drama

When a middle-aged lady decides to become one of the ladies of the night to overcome hardships, she must do all she can to survive the additional struggles to reach an objective.

Lady of the Night

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    1. Odie Samurai
      2022-01-19T09:13:12+10:00Added an answer on January 19, 2022 at 9:13 am

      This is what I can glean:
      “A destitute woman must [show don’t tell GOAL] when caught in a vicious cycle of selling sex to survive”

      As a reader, I’m left asking: Who is she, what kind of prostitution is she involved in, what is her goal, and who is keeping her from accomplishing it?

      Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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