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gatorres8Penpusher
Posted: April 17, 20192019-04-17T08:42:03+10:00 2019-04-17T08:42:03+10:00In: Drama

When a naive girl is captured by a group of people smugglers, she will create a plan to escape from the hell in which she is

When a naive girl is captured by a group of people smugglers, she will create a plan to escape from the hell in which she is
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2019-04-18T08:00:44+10:00Added an answer on April 18, 2019 at 8:00 am

      From your logline, I would probably say your lead is captured by ‘human traffickers’, not ‘people smugglers‘.

      A coyote is a people smuggler. A coyote helps smuggle people over the border without being caught.
      A human trafficker is someone who kidnaps people and then sells them into slavery.

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    2. variable Uberwriter
      2019-04-19T13:39:30+10:00Added an answer on April 19, 2019 at 1:39 pm

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      A naive girl planning to escape is a little monotonous. Urgency is good, she ‘must escape..’ rather than ‘planning to’

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      Getting captured is not the most impressive inciting incident.

      Suggestion: She could be someone lured by false promise of a lucrative job or education scholarship.

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    3. Robb Ross Samurai
      2019-04-22T23:47:23+10:00Added an answer on April 22, 2019 at 11:47 pm

      Yup, and add specifics for the mental picture, like where this is.

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