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AspiringZach
Posted: December 11, 20122012-12-11T09:42:49+10:00 2012-12-11T09:42:49+10:00In: Public

When a neurotic writer struggles to fix two failing relations, one with his psychotic wife, and the other with his difficult criminal brother, he must do everything in his power to save both relationships, even if it includes breaking his brother out of prison.

Charlie’s Shoes

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    1. AspiringZach
      2012-12-11T10:26:26+10:00Added an answer on December 11, 2012 at 10:26 am

      When a neurotic writer struggles to fix two failing relationships, one with his psychotic wife, and the other with his difficult criminal brother, he must do everything in his power to save both relationships, even if it includes breaking his brother out of prison.

      FIXED

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    2. debbiemoon Penpusher
      2012-12-12T19:19:14+10:00Added an answer on December 12, 2012 at 7:19 pm

      That’s fine. There may be a way to boil it down just a little further, remove one or two words here and there, but generally, that works really well.

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    3. 2012-12-13T05:14:18+10:00Added an answer on December 13, 2012 at 5:14 am

      Okay, thank you for all your help!

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