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Posted: 2016-07-04T05:46:59+10:00 In:

When a nice holiday cruise turns bloody, a detective is able to eliminate the murderer after his son surrenders himself to lead the detective straight to her.

When a nice holiday cruise turns bloody, a detective is able to eliminate the murderer after his son surrenders himself to lead the detective straight to her.
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    2 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      As Nir Shelter said, ?it’s confusing.

      And it seems to give away the ending, the solution to murder, something a logline should not do. ?A logline implicitly raises a dramatic question, but it never answers it.

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    2. Singularity

      This sentence is confusing, I’m not sure who does what and why.

      Who is the main character?
      What is their inciting incident?
      What is their goal?

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