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giannisggeorgiouSamurai
Posted: September 15, 20182018-09-15T07:44:18+10:00 2018-09-15T07:44:18+10:00In: Examples

When a nightmarish bogeyman intrudes into her friends’ dreams and kills them for real, a teenager must find a way to defeat him, before she becomes his next victim.

When a nightmarish bogeyman intrudes into her friends’ dreams and kills them for real, a teenager must find a way to defeat him, before she becomes his next victim.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-09-16T16:42:04+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2018 at 4:42 pm

      Freddy embodied the mythological image of an inner demon and this needs to be implied in the logline for the genre to be clear.

      After a demonic murderer kills her friend through her dreams, a terrified teenager must defeat him in his HORROR induced dream world before she becomes his next victim.

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    2. kailic Logliner
      2018-09-19T04:09:28+10:00Added an answer on September 19, 2018 at 4:09 am

      It’s too close to Nightmare on Elm Street. It needs a twist. Same thing but done differently. Maybe instead of “in their dreams” the boogey man gets to them in a different way? Or perhaps be more inventive with the “Nightmarish Bogeyman”. Could be someone they did some injustice to that was killed and is back for revenge? ?Play with and explore this a bit more to add a new element to something that’s already been done.

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