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GabrielPenpusher
Posted: September 8, 20202020-09-08T05:20:52+10:00 2020-09-08T05:20:52+10:00In: Drama

When a now famous singer returns to his hometown after years, an old estranged friend and former band mate, now unsuccessful has to re-create an old gig of their band to get in contact with his friend again.

When a now famous singer returns to his hometown after years, an old estranged friend and former band mate, now unsuccessful has to re-create an old gig of their band to get in contact with his friend again.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2020-09-08T15:33:33+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2020 at 3:33 pm

      I like the premise.

      The logline needs to tighten up a bit. But it isn’t that far off.

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2020-09-09T02:32:32+10:00Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 2:32 am

      Agree, dig the glory days band reunion idea.
      I do struggle with your protag(s), appears to be a buddy show that jumps on the opportunity when their famous singer friend arrives? Please clarify that.

      Leaning towards:
      “When their now-famous singer tours through their hometown, two washed-up former bandmates reunite the estranged members in hopes of wooing him into recreating the career-launching gig that never happened”

      Take care.

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2020-09-11T07:01:41+10:00Added an answer on September 11, 2020 at 7:01 am

      Who is the protagonist here? The character who has made it? Or the one who has failed?

      And what is so important about re-establishing contact? What are the stakes? That is, what does the protagonist stand to lose if he fails? What does he stand to gain if he succeeds?

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