When a psychic accountant with gypsy roots, plagued by crippling secrets and the dead, is blackmailed to fix an accounting problem connected to Nazi?s it turns accounting into crusading.
When a psychic accountant with gypsy roots, plagued by crippling secrets and the dead, is blackmailed to fix an accounting problem connected to Nazi?s it turns accounting into crusading.
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Being a psychic accountant sounds like it is the hook of the story
But then the lead is given a job that seems to need, just normal accounting.
If this is the case then being a psychic isn’t relevant to the story and should be dropped from the logline
or if being a psychic is important, you should tell us ‘in the logline’ why her being a?psychic is needed for the lead to accomplish?her goal.
Agreed with Richiev.
I’ll add that as a whole this logline is very hard to understand. Best you remove anything that doesn’t directly relate to the plot; gypsy roots, psychic, crippling secrets, the dead.
What event motivated the MC aside from been given a job? Him working is not out of the ordinary and lacks a personal connection.