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Posted: November 30, 20162016-11-30T17:18:11+10:00 2016-11-30T17:18:11+10:00In: SciFi

When a Psychic Private Investigator becomes infected with the consciousness of his latest target, he must team up with his inner demons to rid his mind of his unwanted guest.

Inner Battle

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-12-01T03:51:58+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2016 at 3:51 am

      When ?a psychic investigator’s mind is infiltrated by the demons of his latest target, he must rally his own inner demons to save his sanity and life.
      (27 words)

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      2016-12-01T07:35:12+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2016 at 7:35 am

      When a Psychic Private Investigator becomes infected with the consciousness of his latest target, he must team up with his inner demons to rid his mind of his unwanted guest.”

      A lot of “he” and “his” for a one-liner. Is infected the word you really want? That implies, to me at least, something medical whereas the rest of this seems to read as more metaphysical.

      Sounds interesting, though. :0)

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    3. Nero Penpusher
      2016-12-22T15:20:04+10:00Added an answer on December 22, 2016 at 3:20 pm

      I love the idea, the log line speaks to an outer battle that becomes an inner battle of two or more entities. very cool

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