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LachieMPenpusher
Posted: October 11, 20222022-10-11T21:42:48+10:00 2022-10-11T21:42:48+10:00In: Short Film

When a socially-awkward man encounters a thespian girl in an improv class, he must push past his anxiety and perform in a battle for her hand against a man with the same intent.

When a socially-awkward man encounters a thespian girl in an improv class, he must push past his anxiety and perform in a battle for her hand against a man with the same intent.
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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2022-10-13T16:54:25+10:00Added an answer on October 13, 2022 at 4:54 pm

      The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won… not sure that’s really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

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