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Posted: 2016-03-07T22:11:48+10:00 In:

When a stranger meets an evasive artist, the artist must give into the stranger?s outrageous demands, or risk his identity being revealed and his credibility ruined

When a stranger meets an evasive artist, the artist must give into the stranger?s outrageous demands, or risk his identity being revealed and his credibility ruined
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    1. Singularity

      Agreed with DPG.

      Also best to be more specific in the descriptions of a logline, the antagonist description says very little about how they would be a problem for the main character. However if they would be described as a desperate paparazzi then the potential for conflict is immediately understood. Similarly the main character description is vague perhaps best to describe him or her as paranoid, reclusive or both, this way they come across as possibly baring psychological issues and exposure for them could be disastrous.

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    2. Singularity

      The premise posits? a dramatic problem, but not a dramatic goal for the artist whom I assume to be the protagonist.? The artist is portrayed as?a rather hapless, passive?victim.? How thrilling is that?

      The thrill in a thriller?comes from?what?the protagonist proactively?does about his dramatic problem, what he struggles for as an objective goal to solve his problem.?

      So as a result of the stranger’s threats what becomes the artist’s objective goal to proactively free himself of the stranger and his outrageous demands?

      fwiw

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