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Karel SegersLogliner
Posted: March 19, 20162016-03-19T20:39:16+10:00 2016-03-19T20:39:16+10:00In: Examples, Horror

When a teenage girl is relentlessly followed by an unknown supernatural figure after a sexual encounter, she must have sex with someone new to stop it from following, and ultimately killing her.

When a teenage girl is relentlessly followed by an unknown supernatural figure after a sexual encounter, she must have sex with someone new to stop it from following, and ultimately killing her.
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    1. Judah Ray Logliner
      2017-02-01T05:43:23+10:00Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 5:43 am

      Throw a comma in between figure and after, and you have a great logline. Sounds like a great Cinemax late night film.

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    2. Karel Segers Logliner
      2016-04-30T19:05:58+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2016 at 7:05 pm

      EDIT:?After a sexual encounter, a teenage girl realizes she is being followed by a ghastly shapeshifter, and must retain a distance from it to stay alive, or sleep with someone new to pass on the deadly curse.

      This movie really deserves a sequel.

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    3. Karel Segers Samurai
      2016-04-06T11:50:49+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2016 at 11:50 am

      Instead of ‘relentlessly followed’ (which is correct), I would say ‘is being followed’. This more clearly suggests the moment she realises.

      Perhaps?instead of “unknown supernatural figure”, say something like “supernatural humanoid threat”.
      I would also prefer “she must keep a distance to stay alive, or have sex with someone to transfer the deadly curse.” This indicates her dilemma.

      This is a difficult one, because I believe she doesn’t want to transfer the curse.
      So her main goal is to stay alive, and keep a distance from the Being. This is an open goal, which doesn’t always work.

      I adore this movie.

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