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Posted: November 13, 20172017-11-13T10:33:26+10:00 2017-11-13T10:33:26+10:00In: Student Loglines

When a toilet embarks on a journey to self discovery, his dreams are flushed away when a catastrophic injury causes his flush valve to remain open.

When a toilet embarks on a journey to self discovery, his dreams are flushed away when a catastrophic injury causes his flush valve to remain open.
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    1. Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-11-13T14:46:20+10:00Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 2:46 pm

      This is a real movie example?

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2017-11-13T15:29:10+10:00Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 3:29 pm

      The Toilet should have a goal. You say his dream is flushed away, tell us what that dream is.

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    3. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2017-11-13T15:30:16+10:00Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 3:30 pm

      It needs a rewrite regardless.

      Valve being stuck is the obstacle. What does he do to resolve this to reach his/her goal.

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