When a widow realizes that the ongoing completion of her late husband?s life?s work — an adventure park — is depleting her entire inheritance, she decides to integrate a working village in the park to generate income and inadvertently attracts a cult.
Roberto AltoLogliner
When a widow realizes that the ongoing completion of her late husband?s life?s work — an adventure park — is depleting her entire inheritance, she decides to integrate a working village in the park to generate income and inadvertently attracts a cult.
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A logline is a brief statement of one plot with one? overarching objective goal.??There can be other goals and intermediate goals subsumed in subplots and milestones. ?But a logline is about, and only about,?the overarching objective goal — the spine that supports and holds together everything.
Good, but what must her goal be in regards to the cult? Danger? What’s the risk there to overcome? That’s the real story, IMO.