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thedarkhorseSamurai
When a working class town is terrorised by an escaped killer, a married couple team up with the creepy new priest to stop who they believe might be the devil.
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Could lean this out…
When a small town is terrorised by an escaped killer, a married couple teams up with the mysterious new priest – who urges the devil is among them.
-I keep thinking “working class” and “small” is redundant somehow. Same with “married”. But they do conjure up the right images.
INTENTION: Stop the murders.
OBSTACLE: It’s the devil.
Some ideas…
They team up with the creepy priest who during Act 1 continuously harasses the husband to “confess”.
The priest who they are continuously unsure of is somehow killed during the midpoint.
Also, I was thinking the Married Couple is “haunted by supernatural happenings” – so have more of a goal. More of a reason to go to the priest for an explanation.
When a small town is terrorised by an escaped killer, a married couple, haunted by supernatural happenings, team up with the creepy new priest – who urges the devil is among them.
A family man teams up with a priest to stop the ghost of a murderer ? a man whose death he is responsible for, and who is bent on revenge.
– My previous logline for this. Actually might be more of a plot point as opposed to logline.