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Posted: February 27, 20162016-02-27T21:04:50+10:00 2016-02-27T21:04:50+10:00In: Examples

When a young man is found out for desiring his older brother’s beautiful wife, he must go on a journey into the past to discover the cost of possessing a forbidden prize.

When a young man is found out for desiring his older brother’s beautiful wife, he must go on a journey into the past to discover the cost of possessing a forbidden prize.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-02-28T11:30:38+10:00Added an answer on February 28, 2016 at 11:30 am

      The logic of the premise is lost on me. Why must he discover the cost of possessing a forbidden prize before his time?

      After his brother finds out he has the hots for his wife, time travel and forbidden prize ownership do not have a clear cause and effect relationship. I think you mean is he was taken back in time by the ghosts of relationship’s past, to observe a distant relative who managed to get his own brother’s wife and the consequence of those actions. Unlike him, Scrooge was taken back to his own past to see where he went wrong, his goal is to learn to be a better person and avoid damnation. Falling for your brother’s wife, while not ideal, is out of ones control as love will happen whether we like it or not.

      The logline should focus on what the main character’s goal is that comes about from being caught out by his brother.

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-02-29T09:09:40+10:00Added an answer on February 29, 2016 at 9:09 am

      I didn’t realise this was in the classics, sorry my previous post is inaccurate.

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2016-02-29T13:03:37+10:00Added an answer on February 29, 2016 at 1:03 pm

      Based on what information?I’ve been able to glean about this film — not much — it seems to be an unconventional story.? Which leads me to conclude it would be difficult to make it fit into ?the Procustean bed of a conventional logline.

      fwiw.

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    4. Sumi Logliner
      2016-03-10T11:57:42+10:00Added an answer on March 10, 2016 at 11:57 am

      Thanks for your comments all

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