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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: August 2, 20232023-08-02T11:25:15+10:00 2023-08-02T11:25:15+10:00In: Drama

When an ambitious yet struggling young man attempts yet another get-rich-quick scheme against the wishes of his family, things rapidly escalate in all the wrong directions as he realizes all the money he’s just lost in the stock market was drug money demanded to be repaid, the same day.

Title is STOP LOSS

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    1. NisVinten Logliner
      2023-08-03T16:19:01+10:00Added an answer on August 3, 2023 at 4:19 pm

      The thing about get rich scheme caught my attention. We all know that type of person.
      But I am curious – what is the main relation in this movie. Finding that relation and adding it to the logline I think would help.
      You have your action line. But what is the relationship line?
      Also curious about who is the main opponent.. is it the drug dealers or his parents?

      All the best!
      Nis

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