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Posted: 2017-08-23T12:32:30+10:00 In:

When an eccentric family moves into a defunct church building, the enigmatic grandfather starts to preach on Sundays, inspiring but stirring up trouble with the locals.

When an eccentric family moves into a defunct church building, the enigmatic grandfather starts to preach on Sundays, inspiring but stirring up trouble with the locals.
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    1. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Since the grandfather is the only character mentioned I am going to assume he is the lead… If that is the case one important element which is missing is the leads goal.

      What does your lead want?
      Adding that element to the logline will improve it greatly

      (If the Grandfather is not the lead character, you should just do another logline from the perspective of whoever is the lead)

      Good luck

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Faith based films have an audience but it is limited – not sure this would necessarily be a big sell.

      What motivates the grandfather and what specifically is it he wants to achieve?

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