Posted: 2012-08-07T10:39:10+10:00 In:

When an extremely attractive but overly nice bar tender cannot find love, he then recruits his buddies to transform him into be a jerk, until he lands the girl of his dreams and loses her because of his new attitude

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    3 Reviews

    1. You should leave it ending with “…until he lands the girl of his dreams” It kinda leaves a clift hanger. Creates curiosity for whoever is reading it. Adding the last part kinda spoils everything.

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    2. You could tighten it up a little bit as its a bit long, I agree withe the above comment, scrap the ending

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    3. How’s this “When an extremely attractive bar tender cannot find love, he then recruits his buddies to teach him how to be a jerk, until he lands the girl of his dreams.

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