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Chandrakanth Natekar
Posted: July 27, 20212021-07-27T04:22:33+10:00 2021-07-27T04:22:33+10:00In: Coming of Age

When children discover a catastrophic battlefield in every human brain where the devil imprisoned God for ages, Buddha teams up with each prophet to liberate God from an age-old hypocritical mindset to engender recession and a stress-free psychic existence.

The Final destiny – Buddha’s supernatural Journey into the future

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    1. Odie Samurai
      2021-07-30T01:46:18+10:00Added an answer on July 30, 2021 at 1:46 am

      This appears to be two separate events:
      1. “When children discover a catastrophic battlefield in every human brain”
      2. “Buddha teams up with each prophet”

      Who are these children – prophets? If so, I would state to link these two events.

      Example:
      “When the child prophets of Buddha discover a catastrophic battlefield in every human brain, Buddha teams up to liberate God from an age-old hypocritical mindset to engender recession and a stress-free psychic existence”

      Suggestion: “every human brain” sounds like a vast wasteland and hard to envision what this would look like on screen, maybe you can start by changing one influential person to bring this premise closer to home?

      Also, I didn’t mention “devil imprisoned God for ages” to keep the reader from saying “why now” after all these ages? I wanted the impression of these children’s discovery as a “now” concept.

      Take care.

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