When divorced businessman Mr Barton enquires about a hotel?s pay TV service he becomes frustrated by an annoying receptionist with an obsession for popcorn and the Adult Channel.
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When divorced businessman Mr Barton enquires about a hotel?s pay TV service he becomes frustrated by an annoying receptionist with an obsession for popcorn and the Adult Channel.
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A logline doesn’t need to mention the main character’s name unless critical to the story like in a biopic or historical genre.
Becoming frustrated is an emotion not an action, therefor, the logline description of the main action doesn’t provide any information about what the character will actually do in the film.
In addition, no goal or inciting incident are specified and as a result no plot, as this is the primary function of a logline best to redraft with a specific inciting incident and goal in mind.
Is this for a short, or a feature length film?? As Nir Shelter said, it’s kind of thin in terms of the basic elements for a logline.