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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: December 21, 20222022-12-21T03:04:58+10:00 2022-12-21T03:04:58+10:00In: Drama

When he gets to an unknown place, a young student, must find out where he is.

Samael passed out after getting too high, and wakes up in an unknown place besides an unknown person.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2022-12-21T23:24:01+10:00Added an answer on December 21, 2022 at 11:24 pm

      I am a big fan of succinct loglines, however, yours might have taken it a bit too far, I can’t really visualize an unknown place or an unknown person. (The last from you quick synopsis)
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      “When he wakes in a magical land beside a beautiful girl, a gifted math prodigy must use all his skills to determine where he is and how to get back to his own world.”
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      Obviously, yours will be different. Was the lead transported to a different world? Is it a different city? Is it a basement with two people in handcuffs and one must chop off their hand to escape? I can’t tell from your logline.

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