When he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches, a lovelorn but clueless teen has one week to win his true love before she leaves for college.

“When he starts visualizing the desires of anyone he touches, a lovelorn but clueless teen has one week to win his true love before she leaves for college.”

The inciting incident does not logically lead to the goal. Let’s say for a specific example(which you should include, what person’s desires upends his life? What affects him to set his goal? But an example I’ll use:) He sees his mother or father, or some family member’s desires. To him they are not pleasant. To be more comedic maybe his grandmother would work better.
How does that make him want to win his love’s heart? Ask yourself, if next time you touched someone and you suddenly got an image of their desire, would that motivate you to try to get your true love to be with you?

Here’s an example of a film you are likely familiar with, Star Wars:

Inciting incident: Luke?s aunt and uncle are killed,
which causes him to set his…
Goal: To help fight the tyranny of?the Empire
and he does this by?
Action: Learning to use the Force and then joining the Rebellion.
Breaking it down, the inciting incident is that he comes home after visiting Ben Kenobi and finds his family dead. And what does that do? He decides to accept Ben’s offer, to learn to become a Jedi and fight against the Empire. Why? How does that motivate him? Because the Empire took everything from him. He has nothing left. Even at the beginning of the film he’d always wanted more than to just be a farm boy. Now is his chance.
There’s a clear motivation, a clear link between inciting incident and goal. Try checking out the Formula tab at the top of the page if you need more information.
I hope this helps.